EDIT 2: On Falling In
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I think the comments have been clarifying. I tried making an edit, but ehhhh not sure it's enough to continue.

A vast verdant field gathers flowers and butterflies
fluttering in orbit around a country cottage covered by wet
moss and charcoal colored cedar soaking up sunshine
radiated by the atrophy of summer's afterglow.

Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.

Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.

Light meets darkness
as shapes soften.

A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.

singularity
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EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-03-2015, 11:19 AM
RE: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-03-2015, 12:19 PM
RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-04-2015, 04:22 AM
RE: On Falling In - by Achebe - 12-04-2015, 05:28 PM
RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-04-2015, 05:49 PM
RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 09:21 AM
RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:11 AM
RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:30 AM
RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:42 AM
RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:34 PM
RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-11-2015, 10:12 AM
RE: On Falling In - by Jacob - 12-11-2015, 12:39 PM
RE: On Falling In - by Wjames - 12-11-2015, 01:42 PM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-14-2015, 11:53 AM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 01:55 AM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 02:45 AM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 03:56 AM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 04:09 AM
RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by aschueler - 12-18-2015, 10:26 AM



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