12-05-2015, 09:21 AM
I think the comments have been clarifying. I tried making an edit, but ehhhh not sure it's enough to continue.
A vast verdant field gathers flowers and butterflies
fluttering in orbit around a country cottage covered by wet
moss and charcoal colored cedar soaking up sunshine
radiated by the atrophy of summer's afterglow.
Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.
Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.
Light meets darkness
as shapes soften.
A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.
singularity
A vast verdant field gathers flowers and butterflies
fluttering in orbit around a country cottage covered by wet
moss and charcoal colored cedar soaking up sunshine
radiated by the atrophy of summer's afterglow.
Nebulae of green surround the silhouette
created by a rural cabin's eclipse
of the fading sun drifting
below summer's horizon.
Earthen tones accrete around
unnatural shape then collapse
into perpetual darkness.
Light meets darkness
as shapes soften.
A Light
and a Dark. Darkness|
light.
singularity

