12-05-2015, 06:26 AM
I had a hard time trying to understand this poem. I re-read it several times, and it just doesn't flow well.
"-then the slow
seeping
Explosion of a violet You capitalized "Explosion" which made me think that was a separate idea from the slow seeping and it just didn't read well
invasion"
I don't really understand the space at the end either, separating "an army of strain". I don't think it is necessary.
I think I would enjoy this poem more if I knew what you were describing.
"-then the slow
seeping
Explosion of a violet You capitalized "Explosion" which made me think that was a separate idea from the slow seeping and it just didn't read well
invasion"
I don't really understand the space at the end either, separating "an army of strain". I don't think it is necessary.
I think I would enjoy this poem more if I knew what you were describing.