EDIT 2: On Falling In

EDIT 2: On Falling In

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12-04-2015, 04:22 AM

Thanks for your comments, the green on the second line shouldn't be there and it will be fixed next edit...

I think that removing the summer from the second stanza might detract from what I'm trying do...

Thanks!

Originally, I had considered swapping the order of the stanzas...

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EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-03-2015, 11:19 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-03-2015, 12:19 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-04-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Achebe - 12-04-2015, 05:28 PM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-04-2015, 05:49 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 09:21 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:11 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:30 AM

RE: On Falling In - by billy - 12-05-2015, 10:42 AM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-05-2015, 10:34 PM

RE: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-11-2015, 10:12 AM

RE: On Falling In - by Jacob - 12-11-2015, 12:39 PM

RE: On Falling In - by Wjames - 12-11-2015, 01:42 PM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-14-2015, 11:53 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 01:55 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 02:45 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by QDeathstar - 12-18-2015, 03:56 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by Magpie - 12-18-2015, 04:09 AM

RE: EDIT 2: On Falling In - by aschueler - 12-18-2015, 10:26 AM

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