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[billy]

back to your drawing board. i didn't realize why the parentheses

You can stare at me hatefully
Willing for my demise. brevity is a suggestion

I will be sleeping peacefully
No matter your web of lies. web of lies is a common phrase, a way round it would be to remove [of lies]

You can lie in (your?) bed i think your works seeing as he's being told to piss off
Seeing movies you've (you have?) yet to see. i'd go with you have which places more emphasis on you

(Mean?)While I (am?) will be  wed meanwhile i'll be wed
To Lily, who is close to me.

Feel free to say goodbye (or bid?) farewell either feel a bit weak
(However?) I know there is nothing left to tell.

Oh the things in parentheses are what I am considering adding in place ofthe word next to it or have considered adding. I do not know I put them their as a place holder.

Thanksgiving was pretty great then I got shitty news. It's funny in the sense that if you don't laugh about it you might as well cry. Tch Sucks to suck. Also how do I signature on here?