11-29-2015, 12:27 PM
Assuming that not everything posted in this forum is an attempt at a new Four Quartets, this is a nice little piece.
The meter looks broadly OK to me: where syllables fall short, pauses do the work as in L9.
You need to fix L5, which is far too irregular and uses 'research' as a verb, which is odd...
The meter looks broadly OK to me: where syllables fall short, pauses do the work as in L9.
You need to fix L5, which is far too irregular and uses 'research' as a verb, which is odd...