11-29-2015, 12:35 AM
I am still in the probationary new person period, and the FAQ clearly states that I shouldn't state for a poem "I like this", but heck with it.
This one won't count then.
I Like this.
Not sure if there are any changes that I could suggest; perhaps after "Eliot" and the start of the next line "religious" there should be a sentence break, unless you meant for these writers to be akin to arcane religion, as it reads that seems to refer that way. Maybe a semicolon would work.
Your poem is very touching and something that should be shared.
This one won't count then.
I Like this.
Not sure if there are any changes that I could suggest; perhaps after "Eliot" and the start of the next line "religious" there should be a sentence break, unless you meant for these writers to be akin to arcane religion, as it reads that seems to refer that way. Maybe a semicolon would work.
Your poem is very touching and something that should be shared.