11-27-2015, 06:26 PM
Ahhhh I see! So it is spoken word poetry. Maybe consider submitting an audio clip? I think then it would I would be more able to help you. consider sites like vocaroo or chirbit or soundcloud. If you don't like that idea I would suggest recording anyways, but only you yourself listen to the recording.
I never spent my free time staring at the sun o.o
I never spent my free time staring at the sun o.o

