False Bloom
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(11-27-2015, 03:59 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  The heart of the poem lies in the petals' ability to bleed.
I reconsider -- 
it still feels weird to me, you know, but I'll let the feeling pass. I don't see it as something that could be fixed, to be honest.
The other three notes still stand, I think.
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Messages In This Thread
False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-18-2015, 07:59 AM
RE: False Bloom - by dukealien - 11-18-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-19-2015, 11:09 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-21-2015, 08:52 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-22-2015, 02:41 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Jezie - 11-22-2015, 03:13 PM
RE: False Bloom - by Plato - 11-23-2015, 10:02 AM
RE: False Bloom - by billy - 11-23-2015, 11:18 AM
RE: False Bloom - by Moonstruck1 - 11-23-2015, 12:39 PM
RE: False Bloom - by billy - 11-23-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-23-2015, 01:37 PM
RE: False Bloom - by Merfyn Dafydd - 11-26-2015, 12:30 AM
RE: False Bloom - by RiverNotch - 11-27-2015, 03:17 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-27-2015, 03:59 PM
RE: False Bloom - by RiverNotch - 11-27-2015, 04:04 PM
RE: False Bloom - by rayheinrich - 11-27-2015, 06:08 PM



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