Stealing Fruit (edit 2)

Stealing Fruit (edit 2)

Achebe Offline

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11-23-2015, 02:13 PM

the revised version is a train wreck. it can kill baby deer.
the original was pretty good, just needed a few tweaks here and there.
take any crit with a tonne of NaCl.
delete!! delete!! delete!!

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Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Genuinebloke - 11-18-2015, 05:42 AM

RE: Stealing Fruit - by billy - 11-18-2015, 12:03 PM

RE: Stealing Fruit - by tectak - 11-19-2015, 10:27 PM

RE: Stealing Fruit - by Achebe - 11-20-2015, 11:49 AM

RE: Stealing Fruit - by Mark A Becker - 11-20-2015, 11:59 AM

RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 1) - by Genuinebloke - 11-22-2015, 07:53 AM

RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 1) - by Achebe - 11-23-2015, 02:13 PM

RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Genuinebloke - 12-31-2015, 08:50 PM

RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Achebe - 01-03-2016, 07:00 PM

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