11-23-2015, 11:18 AM
just one point for me, a question; what is a true flower? and what is force? i ask because most plants, including roses can and often are forced. okay now i have another question? can a rose feel remorse? as a metaphor i still struggle with it, i'm guessing the rose intimates the female genitalia and the petals are the lips. if this is so, i don't think fannies feel remorse if it's not a metaphor then i don't get it.
(11-18-2015, 07:59 AM)Moonstruck1 Wrote: False Bloom
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A single bud slit from the land,
The blood of petals stains my hand.
Both rose and I seized by remorse,
For no true flower blooms by force.
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A single bud held by a strand.
The blood of petals stains his hand.
Both rose and he seized by remorse,
for no true flower blooms by force.