Lost

[Wjames]

would it work better without [find]

i love the that beauty rises above ugly

It's a clearer image without find, but I like the lost/found play with the title.

I'll think some more about it, thanks for reading.

I like the poem's idealism; I wish the world was like that.
But that's one of the reasons I like poetry so much as it doesn't have
to allow for reality; stuff doesn't have to follow rules.

Around here a lot of the damn noise comes from birds trying to find mates.
If there are three, it's because two of them are males vying for a female.
Not that harmonious.

I'd keep that "find".

Thanks for your thoughts Ray, you're definitely right about the lack of realism here.