11-22-2015, 02:56 PM
This is a fun read... I only have a few thoughts... In S3 L4... It feels a bit forced. The line itself works, but feels odd and took away from the poem for me. The change from ABAB to ABAB was interesting.
Do you have the patience to wait
Till your mud settles and the water is clear?
Can you remain unmoving
Till the right action arises by itself?
~Lao tzu
Till your mud settles and the water is clear?
Can you remain unmoving
Till the right action arises by itself?
~Lao tzu