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Stealing Fruit (edit 2)

Stealing Fruit (edit 2)
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11-22-2015, 07:53 AM
Four sets of highly constructive comments, thank you. Clearly there was a need to clarify key areas of the poem. Hopefully the edited version goes some way towards this, while retaining the strengths that were highlighted.
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Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Genuinebloke - 11-18-2015, 05:42 AM
RE: Stealing Fruit - by billy - 11-18-2015, 12:03 PM
RE: Stealing Fruit - by tectak - 11-19-2015, 10:27 PM
RE: Stealing Fruit - by Achebe - 11-20-2015, 11:49 AM
RE: Stealing Fruit - by Mark A Becker - 11-20-2015, 11:59 AM
RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 1) - by Genuinebloke - 11-22-2015, 07:53 AM
RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 1) - by Achebe - 11-23-2015, 02:13 PM
RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Genuinebloke - 12-31-2015, 08:50 PM
RE: Stealing Fruit (edit 2) - by Achebe - 01-03-2016, 07:00 PM



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