11-19-2015, 03:22 PM
(11-19-2015, 01:01 PM)Wjames Wrote:(11-19-2015, 12:53 PM)billy Wrote: would it work better without [find]It's a clearer image without find, but I like the lost/found play with the title.
i love the that beauty rises above ugly
I'll think some more about it, thanks for reading.
I like the poem's idealism; I wish the world was like that.
But that's one of the reasons I like poetry so much as it doesn't have
to allow for reality; stuff doesn't have to follow rules.
Around here a lot of the damn noise comes from birds trying to find mates.
If there are three, it's because two of them are males vying for a female.
Not that harmonious.
I'd keep that "find".
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

