Using abstract nouns, adjectives, adverbs, et al.

[rayheinrich]

Just happened across this. I figured it might lead to a useful discussion;
or, even better, to some deliciously snide remarks:

Deciding to use an abstract noun (or adjective or adverb) in a poem is a
decision that should not be taken lightly. While there are very real (pun
intended) uses for them (ruling them out completely is a mistake), their
use can usually be attributed to a fit of sloth. An image that induces the feeling
of what an abstract noun only names, makes for a much more effective poem."
- Mary Oliver

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"The beauty of a colorful spring garden."

versus:

"A garden filled with daffodils and spring." - Susan Mitchell

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