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The poem makes me think of the need to be accepted to be part of something established, for some reason I see it as a couple moving to a new country trying to fit in. Last two lines are great they add a dimension that reads of socialising having a good time found that uplifting as it's much more than a need to fit in. My only nit would be I wanted to know more of the out come. Nice pic too Ray. Best Keith

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< gardens > - by rayheinrich - 11-13-2015, 04:50 PM
RE: < gardens > - by just mercedes - 11-13-2015, 05:14 PM
RE: < gardens > - by rayheinrich - 11-14-2015, 03:00 PM
RE: < gardens > - by Keith - 11-14-2015, 04:45 AM
RE: < gardens > - by Gormind - 11-20-2015, 07:13 AM
RE: < gardens > - by rayheinrich - 11-20-2015, 10:21 AM
RE: < gardens > - by Achebe - 11-20-2015, 05:39 PM
RE: < gardens > - by rayheinrich - 11-21-2015, 01:36 AM



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