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Contained edit (Cousin/WJ/Ray)

the thing about a hip flask
is it says a lot about you—
much more than your shoes
 
you don’t have a meet cute
with a young mother
in the park at 10 am—

you go home and sleep through afternoon
dream you’re a king
and forget you were dreaming
 
if you wake
it will be uneasily
 
you will refill the flask
and still not know
it has grown dark
 
the parks are empty.



Contained  -original

the thing about a hip-flask
is it says a lot about you—
much more than your shoes
 
you don’t have a meet-cute
with a young mother
in the park at 10am—
spring or fall
 
you go home and sleep through afternoon
dream you’re a king
and forget you were dreaming
 
if you wake
it will be uneasily
 
you will refill the flask
and still not know
it has grown dark
 
the parks are empty.
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Contained - by Tiger the Lion - 11-12-2015, 11:17 AM
RE: Contained - by Cousin Kil - 11-14-2015, 04:28 AM
RE: Contained - by Tiger the Lion - 11-16-2015, 01:04 AM
RE: Contained - by Wjames - 11-19-2015, 01:09 PM
RE: Contained - by rayheinrich - 11-19-2015, 04:25 PM
RE: Contained - by Tiger the Lion - 11-22-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Contained - by rayheinrich - 11-22-2015, 03:02 AM
RE: Contained - by Tiger the Lion - 11-22-2015, 03:46 AM
RE: Contained - by rayheinrich - 11-22-2015, 08:08 AM



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