11-10-2015, 12:30 AM
I like this poem but think you could add more to it. I feel as though the last verse isn't finished.
I enjoyed reading it and it almost had a sing song effect.
I am new to all this and hopefully can come back and leave more feedback when I get into the swing of things.
I hope this helps!
I enjoyed reading it and it almost had a sing song effect.
I am new to all this and hopefully can come back and leave more feedback when I get into the swing of things.
I hope this helps!