11-08-2015, 07:44 AM
First ever poem, so all thoughts and suggestions are eagerly invited!
Do You Remember Me?
Do you remember me?
When our stars struck over the churning seas
We burst into a million little pieces,
Each a letter spelling our love,
Down to the water they rained
A lingering luminescence
So we lit the legend of you and me
When our stars struck above the churning seas
Do you remember me?
When we made love ’neath the sycamore tree
When I was the artist,
And you were my canvas,
Each kiss a new colour
In the palette of our existence
So we sketched the story of you and me
When we made love ’neath the sycamore tree.
Do you remember me?
I remember you –
I do.
Do You Remember Me?
Do you remember me?
When our stars struck over the churning seas
We burst into a million little pieces,
Each a letter spelling our love,
Down to the water they rained
A lingering luminescence
So we lit the legend of you and me
When our stars struck above the churning seas
Do you remember me?
When we made love ’neath the sycamore tree
When I was the artist,
And you were my canvas,
Each kiss a new colour
In the palette of our existence
So we sketched the story of you and me
When we made love ’neath the sycamore tree.
Do you remember me?
I remember you –
I do.