11-02-2015, 05:51 PM
Your first stanza immediately think of Winnie the Pooh, and I think that tone really carries through the rest of the poem. It's not childish by any means, but there's definitely a youthful, innocent, whimsical quality to it. I'd like to think of it as Christopher Robin and Winnie the Pooh as CR enters adolescence. It's a wonderfully vivid read. I'd love to be able to turn this poem into a mural in my apartment.