Charleston
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1. I love the repetition of "work the city," with the different workers, and how each time it gets repeated, it gets more desperate and worn and tired. I could practically feel in my bones how tired that last woman was, how tired the city was and the people in it.

2. Really great at capturing how it feels like being a girl walking around a new city that you don't live in.

Overall, I really love how real this poem feels, and how relatable it is.
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Charleston - by fluorescent.43 - 11-02-2015, 10:41 AM
RE: Charleston - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 11-02-2015, 03:17 PM
RE: Charleston - by Achebe - 11-03-2015, 07:30 PM
RE: Charleston - by fluorescent.43 - 11-07-2015, 11:29 AM
RE: Charleston - by AlstonTowers - 11-10-2015, 11:57 PM



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