11-01-2015, 12:01 PM
I like your sonnet - the meter is a little ragged in places (lines 1, 7, 10 and 13 on a first run through) but that may be intentional. I really like the way questions evoke a response from the reader.
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A sonnet based on a Finnish pop song
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