The Lyme Grove

[Genuinebloke]

What would be standard practice (if there is such a thing)?
Should I edit here, then have it moved, or start a new thread with a revised version in another forum?
I like rules, so am keen to start as I would be expected to go on :-)

No standard practice except usually one thread per poem, and best to let members follow the edits (that's the interesting stuff ). If you want more thorough crit on the version you have up now, move it now. If you're want to wait until you edit place your edit above the original and ask to have it moved then.

Aside: I assumed Lyme was a regional spelling but now tectak's comment has me thinking of Lyme disease. hhhmmm, poetry's a fun thing.

Excellent. I have edited. Please could I be transferred to receive some serious crit on the revised version?
"Lyme" was a reference to a specific place, though this clearly lacks value to anyone who does not know the place :-) Have added a new working title.

Done, the edit is up for Serious critique. Good luck with it, ella