10-28-2015, 02:32 AM
(10-28-2015, 02:23 AM)Genuinebloke Wrote: Thank you all for some excellent feedback. I have a clear idea on what to work on, plus a strong sense that it is actually WORTH working on. I will come back with a revised version for more serious critique in due course (I presume that is all in keeping with how the forum works?).Good egg,
More serious crit? Do you want it moving after editing?
Of little consequence, methinks, but there are more Lime Groves than Lyme Groves...see what I mean? What do YOU mean?
Best,
tectak