10-27-2015, 10:00 AM
Hello all,
Thank you for the feedback! I definitely stepped out of my comfort zone on this one. I tried to find a central metaphor and build something on that, looks like its back to the drawing board!
Ella,
Florid is definitely an accurate word to describe this piece. I think im going to rewrite it completely in order to avoid it coming off that way. Thanks for the pointers!
Milo,
I read that link, good stuff. I've been studying Ezras works lately so I hope that shows in the next edit. Thanks for the exposure.
Billy,
Thanks for the feedback. Be the parrot... Be the parrot... Be the parrot... Haha I totally get what you mean though. I'm going to keep trying with this one but I think I'm going to take on a new approach in the next edit.
Thanks all for the feedback!
Thank you for the feedback! I definitely stepped out of my comfort zone on this one. I tried to find a central metaphor and build something on that, looks like its back to the drawing board!
Ella,
Florid is definitely an accurate word to describe this piece. I think im going to rewrite it completely in order to avoid it coming off that way. Thanks for the pointers!
Milo,
I read that link, good stuff. I've been studying Ezras works lately so I hope that shows in the next edit. Thanks for the exposure.
Billy,
Thanks for the feedback. Be the parrot... Be the parrot... Be the parrot... Haha I totally get what you mean though. I'm going to keep trying with this one but I think I'm going to take on a new approach in the next edit.
Thanks all for the feedback!
Crit away