Birch Leaves

[ellajam]

Hi, jly, This really works for me, just the last line seems unnecessary., birch is in the title and there's plenty of movement in the middle line, maybe you can come up with something else than can apply to both birch leaves and belly dancers.

I read river's comment and have to add that in my read I did not equate a belly dancer's celebration of her body with harlotry. And even if I did, the strong image of shimmying hips and leaves would be fine, and well done.