My Dream Girl

[Stateofmind]

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My Dream Girl

Today I met the girl
of my dreams.
She wrote poetry
(far better than I),
sang, danced, cooked,
cleaned; More beautiful
than Jennifer Aniston, 
Garner, Lawrence, Lopez...

Combined.

She was more interesting
than I could ever perceive.
We talked for hours
it seemed-- about inspiration 
amongst other things. My friends
tried to woo her when I walked 
away. She texted me pleading
"Come back to me!" I replied...

"Come dine?"

So at a diner we met,
I wept, she asked why.
"You're the girl of my dreams,
and I'm afraid our time's limited
for soon we all wake, forever
we'll seperate. For that my eyes quake."
She simply smiled, a luscious strand
of hair caught in her lips, and said:

"Relax."

So I relaxed and we lived,
for once in my life.
We took a train to nowhere,
we rode a ferris wheel
at the fair. We danced in the bar
when no one else would,
we snuck in the movies like
children. We made love. Twice.

Climax.

Life can be so climactic...
we took a stroll down the block
when a shadowy figure crossed
our path. Rather than walk my dream
girl straight to danger, we crossed the street.
Yet the shadowy figure followed, 
as he drew closer I whispered "Run!"
I turned. He drew a knife and stabbed m-

Awaken.

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Today I met the
girl of my dreams.
She wrote poetry
(far better than I),
sang, danced, cooked,
cleaned; She was more
beautiful than Jennifer
Aniston, Garner, Lopez...

Combined.

She was more interesting
than I could ever perceive.
We talked for hours it seemed,
about inspiration amongst
other things. My friends tried
to woo her when I walked away.
She simply texted me pleading
"Come back to me!" I replied...

"Come dine?"

So at a diner we met,
I wept, she asked why.
"You're the girl of my dreams,
and I'm afraid our times limited.
For soon we all wake, forever you'll
be gone, for that my eyes quake."
She simply smiled, a luscious strand
of hair caught in her lips, and said:

"Relax."

So I relaxed and we lived,
for once in my life.
We took a train to nowhere,
we rode a ferris wheel at
the fair. We danced in the
bar when no one else would,
we snuck in the movies like
children. We made love. Twice.

Climax.

Life can be so climactic...
we took a stroll down the block
when a shadowy figure crossed
our path. Rather than walk my dream
girl straight to danger, we crossed the street. Yet the figure followed us, as
he closed in I told her "Run!" and turned
around. He drew a knife and stabbed m-

Awaken.

I enjoyed the journey this took me on. When she said, "Relax".... so didn't I lol. There's nothing like that moment when ur assured that everything will be ok. I was actually fearful for the couple at the mention of a "shadow figure". And I'm glad u woke up, but a little disappointed it was all a dream lol. Thanks for this.