My Fear

[Stateofmind]

http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-8674.html

No.... it is what is now. I wouldn't have posted it if otherwise. I'd rather let it stay what it was meant to be and try out what other people suggest in an entirely new thought.

you do realize this is a critique forum???

Yeah lol. And the criticism is well received. I just don't care to really try to change what I think of as ...... a moment of my thoughts put into words (for lack of a better description). I've already left that moment. I'd rather try to use the critiques I've received in the next moment I choose to use for inspiration. 


http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-8674.html

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http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-8674.html

No.... it is what is now. I wouldn't have posted it if otherwise. I'd rather let it stay what it was meant to be and try out what other people suggest in an entirely new thought.

you do realize this is a critique forum???

Yeah lol. And the criticism is well received. I just don't care to really try to change what I think of as ...... a moment of my thoughts put into words (for lack of a better description). I've already left that moment. I'd rather try to use the critiques I've received in the next moment I choose to use for inspiration. 


http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-8674.html

Thanks for the link. It was good read. I agree with most of it. So let me explain some more... it's the frame of mind that induced that particular piece. It will never be exactly the same again. To go back to it.... with the purpose of editing. .. after having already left the moment that created it as well as the frame of mind... is not to actually edit it. It's to give rise to an entirely different frame of mind. And the original moment becomes lost. I'm sure there's a better way of explaining what I'm trying to say. Forgive me for not finding it.