10-11-2015, 10:26 AM
Quote:No.... it is what is now. I wouldn't have posted it if otherwise. I'd rather let it stay what it was meant to be and try out what other people suggest in an entirely new thought.I think the subject matter is worth while enough to warrant an edit, you do realize this is a critique forum???
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