My Fear
#14
Quote:No.... it is what is now. I wouldn't have posted it if otherwise. I'd rather let it stay what it was meant to be and try out what other people suggest in an entirely new thought.
I think the subject matter is worth while enough to warrant an edit, you do realize this is a critique forum???


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Messages In This Thread
My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-10-2015, 03:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by sunilmathur - 10-10-2015, 06:20 PM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 02:48 AM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-11-2015, 04:39 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: My Fear - by ohkshea - 10-10-2015, 08:33 PM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-10-2015, 10:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 04:38 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 07:17 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 08:24 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 11:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by tectak - 10-11-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: My Fear - by YolaSm - 10-11-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 10:26 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 10:38 AM



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