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My Fear
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10-11-2015, 07:17 AM
I don't think you need to wait for "next time". If this is something you want to work with you could read the critiques for clues on how to edit or rewrite this and take another swing at it.
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My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-10-2015, 03:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by sunilmathur - 10-10-2015, 06:20 PM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 02:48 AM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-11-2015, 04:39 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: My Fear - by ohkshea - 10-10-2015, 08:33 PM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-10-2015, 10:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 04:38 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 07:17 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 08:24 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 11:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by tectak - 10-11-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: My Fear - by YolaSm - 10-11-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 10:26 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 10:38 AM
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