10-11-2015, 07:11 AM
(10-11-2015, 07:02 AM)elviaje26 Wrote: With the exception of Qdeathstar, I am very gratefull with the pleathrea of great suggestions. I am very grateful!IMO whether a poem is based on fact or fiction has nothing to do of my experience with it or my critique of it, it just doesn't matter.
FYI, this poem in not fictional.
Honest comments by members of the Pen are welcome on any thread. It is a gift when someone tells you your poem doesn't work for them, it's always good to know what to work on. Further comments like this will be deleted.ella/mod
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