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My Fear
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10-10-2015, 06:20 PM
You've brought out the importance of family life in this rhymed, smooth-flowing poem. The man ponders why he's alone; why he's alone is still a mystery. These do not seem to be realistic. Certainly the man knows why he is alone and why he has not married. In 'lifes history', the apostrophe after 'e' seems to be missing.
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My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-10-2015, 03:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by sunilmathur - 10-10-2015, 06:20 PM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 02:48 AM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-11-2015, 04:39 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: My Fear - by ohkshea - 10-10-2015, 08:33 PM
RE: My Fear - by rayheinrich - 10-10-2015, 10:14 PM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 04:38 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 07:17 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 08:24 AM
RE: My Fear - by ellajam - 10-11-2015, 11:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by tectak - 10-11-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: My Fear - by YolaSm - 10-11-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: My Fear - by QDeathstar - 10-11-2015, 10:26 AM
RE: My Fear - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 10:38 AM
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