No One Thing Is Enough

[Keith]

When I get done writing a poem I try not to read it anymore for awhile because it'll give me nightmares. I sometimes after a year or so look at things and change things here and there.

A person reading a poem these days is going to feel slightly embarrassed or even cringe when reading a line referring to true love as a generic pronoun. As if true love was a subject.

Duly noted Rowens and in fairness you did post in Misc so......but I'm not really sure how to respond to your comment, would you prefer that I didn't comment on your poetry ?

I would say I personally didn't read true love as embarrassing or cringe worthy my comment would be the same "its bland" it gives the reader nothing to work with other than the obvious definition of what we perceive true love to mean.