10-08-2015, 08:37 PM
Didn't quite like it from ahhhh, you onwards...but some suggested changes...
(09-16-2015, 10:47 AM)71degrees Wrote: I heard she went and married
a short glass of white milk kind of guy.
But back when she was in my arms
pink tulip skin, rosebud nipples
She would rub her curls against my neck,
Lick small beads of sweat from my nose
When words failed us,
we spoke only in vowels:
ahhh, you
ohhh, you
The Moody Blues had nothing
we never heard before