Junku
#16
in the party that thinks "his" should be removed. i mean, i get the joke, but i guess it would be a cooler, subtler sort of joke if the addict missed. loled at the slave bit -- feel like that word's the turn, not just the last line. maybe remove dash, too? as in, move it to right before "slave"?
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Junku - by Magpie - 03-17-2015, 02:00 AM
RE: Junku - by Tiger the Lion - 03-17-2015, 03:24 AM
RE: Junku - by Magpie - 03-17-2015, 09:17 PM
RE: Junku - by just mercedes - 03-17-2015, 08:06 AM
RE: Junku - by billy - 03-17-2015, 10:34 AM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-17-2015, 11:20 PM
RE: Junku - by Magpie - 03-19-2015, 01:52 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-19-2015, 02:42 PM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 03-19-2015, 05:32 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 03-19-2015, 08:16 PM
RE: Junku - by justlikeyou - 10-06-2015, 08:40 AM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 10-06-2015, 08:41 PM
RE: Junku - by justlikeyou - 10-06-2015, 10:06 PM
RE: Junku - by rayheinrich - 10-07-2015, 06:31 PM
RE: Junku - by ellajam - 10-06-2015, 09:13 PM
RE: Junku - by RiverNotch - 10-08-2015, 04:42 AM



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