Plunge
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I really liked this, short, sweet, but complex. You did a great job of giving it that double meaning. The symbolism of jumping into an icy cold pool and jumping into a troubling situation in life. I like how you imply that it can be worth it if you can deceive yourself, because in reality the biggest threat to holding a person back is themselves.
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Plunge - by Jezie - 09-26-2015, 07:01 AM
RE: Plunge - by just mercedes - 09-26-2015, 02:12 PM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 09-26-2015, 08:26 PM
RE: Plunge - by peacejazzspirit - 09-26-2015, 02:12 PM
RE: Plunge - by yessiryessum - 09-27-2015, 08:07 AM
RE: Plunge - by Stateofmind - 09-27-2015, 12:48 PM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 09-28-2015, 12:21 PM
RE: Plunge - by rowens - 09-29-2015, 06:13 AM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 09-29-2015, 01:54 PM
RE: Plunge - by skadragon - 09-29-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 10-01-2015, 11:52 AM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 10-02-2015, 02:11 PM
RE: Plunge - by Phat Monkey - 10-07-2015, 01:21 PM
RE: Plunge - by elviaje26 - 10-07-2015, 01:49 PM
RE: Plunge - by Todd - 11-20-2015, 03:27 AM
RE: Plunge - by Jezie - 11-28-2015, 11:11 AM
RE: Plunge - by rayheinrich - 11-20-2015, 05:25 AM



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