Susan's Fall
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(10-06-2015, 10:52 PM)ellajam Wrote:  petals dropped
black eyes a bouquet
of bumblebees
This is great Ella, keep coming back to see something different each time, and so much to see. What I like is the structure allows the reader a couple of options and the image shifts with the text. Great stuff, Keith

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Susan's Fall - by ellajam - 10-06-2015, 10:52 PM
RE: Susan's October - by Tiger the Lion - 10-06-2015, 11:09 PM
RE: Susan's October - by Keith - 10-07-2015, 05:00 AM
RE: Susan's October - by ellajam - 10-07-2015, 10:49 AM
RE: Susan's October - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2015, 11:28 PM
RE: Susan's October - by ellajam - 10-14-2015, 12:36 AM



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