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Susan's Fall

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10-06-2015, 11:09 PM

(10-06-2015, 10:52 PM)ellajam Wrote: petals dropped
black eyes a bouquet
of bumblebees

Bumblebees is such a great word. I like that the b's start in L2. Cool buzz. Thumbsup

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Susan's Fall - by ellajam - 10-06-2015, 10:52 PM

RE: Susan's October - by Tiger the Lion - 10-06-2015, 11:09 PM

RE: Susan's October - by Keith - 10-07-2015, 05:00 AM

RE: Susan's October - by ellajam - 10-07-2015, 10:49 AM

RE: Susan's October - by ellajam - 10-14-2015, 12:36 AM

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