10-06-2015, 02:13 AM
Really enjoyed this esp the girl in the tree, you have captured the open anything can happen of youth and let it go flat in the grease popped bubbles in the sink, so glad the trees glow red it leaves me with the hope all is not lost. Second use of knees I get is a comparison but could be legs ? Just a thought it would pick up a partial rhyme from tread. A pleasure to read, and a treat to hear Milo take the mic, clearly inspired as I am. Best Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out