09-30-2015, 11:01 PM
(09-16-2015, 10:47 AM)71degrees Wrote: I heard she grew up to marryHi, 71, I like this, it does a good job of bringing back the sweaty sex to the soundtrack of the times. L2 would appeal to me more if I hadn't heard a similar phrase but it does a a good job of being unimpressed with with her choice.
a short glass of white milk kind of guy,
but back then she was in my arms:
pink tulip skin, edible nipples
She would rub her curls against my neck,
slurp small beads of sweat from my nose
When words failed us,
we spoke only in vowels:
ahhh, you
ohhh, you
The Moody Blues had nothing
we never heard before
I love what others don't, slurp/small/sweat.
Quote:She would rub her curls against my neck,These lines for me, taken with the Moody Blues, evoke an open and deep involvement in the moment.
slurp small beads of sweat from my nose
I like the vowels too, thanks for the read, I continue to enjoy it.
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