The Trouble With Dying...

The Trouble With Dying...

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09-30-2015, 11:50 AM

Whoa. This is a lot heavier lol. The only line im having trouble with is the second- is this insinuating the Narrator has a gun under his pillow?
Great poem- dark, subtle, and short. Just my kind of poem

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The Trouble With Dying... - by shemthepenman - 09-30-2015, 11:06 AM

RE: Suicide: The Wittiest Form of Low - by Weeded - 09-30-2015, 11:50 AM

RE: Suicide: The Wittiest Form of Low - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 04:00 PM

RE: Suicide: The Wittiest Form of Low - by shemthepenman - 09-30-2015, 05:31 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 06:11 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by Weeded - 09-30-2015, 08:25 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by ellajam - 09-30-2015, 09:27 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 10:07 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by Quixilated - 10-01-2015, 01:07 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 01:50 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 05:22 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 05:39 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 06:51 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 07:02 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by shemthepenman - 10-01-2015, 07:29 AM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 03:47 PM

RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 07:45 AM

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