The Trouble With Dying...
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The trouble with dying,
kept under my pillow,
evaporates when light
through my window
cracks the broken neck shadows
on the wall,
and abstracts what I cannot abstract any more;
until, the trouble with dying
is no trouble at all.


[i had posted this here before, but as i have recently read a couple of poems about insomnia recently i thought i would repost in solidarity with my sleep deprived comrades - note, the only edits made to the original are the spelling 'any more' (rather than 'anymore') and 'kept' (instead of 'keeps'').]
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The Trouble With Dying... - by shemthepenman - 09-30-2015, 11:06 AM
RE: Suicide: The Wittiest Form of Low - by Weeded - 09-30-2015, 11:50 AM
RE: Suicide: The Wittiest Form of Low - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 04:00 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 06:11 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by Weeded - 09-30-2015, 08:25 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by ellajam - 09-30-2015, 09:27 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 09-30-2015, 10:07 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by Quixilated - 10-01-2015, 01:07 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 01:50 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 05:22 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 05:39 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 06:51 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 07:02 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by shemthepenman - 10-01-2015, 07:29 AM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by tectak - 10-01-2015, 03:47 PM
RE: The Trouble With Dying... - by milo - 10-01-2015, 07:45 AM



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