09-29-2015, 12:09 PM
I like a lot of this poem. Moved me. I think that with a few small revisions and a couple of tiny tempo tinkerings this one could be a *keeper*.
Good work.
Good work.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."