Plunge

[Jezie]

Loved it. Made me think of a troubled woman on the verge of making a permanent decision. The icy plunge. Although I'm a man... I can identify with that. If that is your desired direction. She's thinking about her past decisions and the one that lay ahead. .. that icy plunge. She's prepared for this by removing her clothing in order to leave this world naked... just as she was when she entered it

Thank you... I am glad I got most of it clearly across... I am glad you loved it.

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Very interesting and cool! Love the image- makes you wonder what's next.

My one suggestion would be in:

The plunge would be icy, 
until the burn of exhaustion runs rampant through her.

"Would be icy" and "exhaustion runs rampant" don't quite seem to agree.  Maybe it's conveying a different effect? Not sure.  I think "exhaustion would run rampant" might help, but it's up to you!

Thank you for the feedback... I will give this area more thiught and see what I can come up with...