September

[Alexearth]

The season finally slumps
and in the tender light
behind the pane,
tired glances upon swirling
glasses;
couples pretend worlds
from their worn leather
couches,
and fade away on a warm
brass note.



I got used to looking at it like that before I saw it right. I'm not sure if that's what I would have put. But they're your decisions.

Interesting. Thanks for your help Rowens!
My choice would be:

The season finally slumps-
and in the tender light
behind the pane,
tired glances upon swirling glasses;
couples pretend worlds
from their worn leather couches,
and fade away
on a warm brass note.