September
#4
The season finally slumps
and in the tender light
behind the pane,
tired glances upon swirling
glasses;
couples pretend worlds
from their worn leather
couches,
and fade away on a warm
brass note.


I got used to looking at it like that before I saw it right. I'm not sure if that's what I would have put. But they're your decisions.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
September - by Alexearth - 09-23-2015, 10:24 PM
RE: September - by rowens - 09-24-2015, 05:39 AM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 09-24-2015, 05:49 PM
RE: September - by rowens - 09-25-2015, 02:39 AM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 09-25-2015, 02:54 AM
RE: September - by 3zu - 09-26-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 09-26-2015, 08:03 PM
RE: September - by 3zu - 09-26-2015, 10:18 PM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 09-28-2015, 11:06 PM
RE: September - by ellajam - 09-29-2015, 08:53 PM
RE: September - by skadragon - 09-30-2015, 04:10 PM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 10-05-2015, 05:42 AM
RE: September - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2015, 11:11 PM
RE: September - by Alexearth - 10-14-2015, 02:15 AM
RE: September - by Achebe - 10-24-2015, 08:56 PM



Users browsing this thread: 2 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!