September

[rowens]

The line breaks look more interesting on this phone's standard view, but yours aren't horrible. I might can say more about that when I get to a computer. I think tender is a nice word for that light, almost simple. The third line makes sense with me, but also seems the most questionable, though it's not horrible either. I like everything after the semicolon. The hectic yet lazy summer steam and tension caressing into fall. That's how it feels to me.