09-22-2015, 01:22 PM
I liked this. Liked mumbling it beneath my breath to myself. These kinds of poems are hard to pull off. I've tried and failed before.
On another note...I remember when we were discussing Borges...his labyrinths of time and recurrence...somehow this poem brought me into one of those...one of your own.
Me like.
On another note...I remember when we were discussing Borges...his labyrinths of time and recurrence...somehow this poem brought me into one of those...one of your own.
Me like.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."