09-22-2015, 08:25 AM
Appreciate your feedback Billy, a little wordy I agree. Enjambment, I have no idea what that means so I'll definitely Google it. Emo like you say?? Wonder why, am I this emo teen who stays locked in her room and writes all day about tormented writers like herself getting stabbed in the eye with their writing materials and never realized it before?
Nah... I'm quite the opposite, but my mind was in a darker place when I wrote this. Thanks once more.
Nah... I'm quite the opposite, but my mind was in a darker place when I wrote this. Thanks once more.
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.

