That Smell
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(09-21-2015, 08:51 AM)Keith Wrote:  Everyone is watching
three rizzla's
on an album sleeve.
Heated crumbs
spread like seeds.
I can smell
the crop
burning my throat.

A diver in deep seas,
leaded
at belt and boot.

A cough laughs
on its way out
and I wonder what
I'm talking about,
and why they are
laughing at me.

    You have, dare I say, captured the essence.


    I feel like such a milo, but: The correct spelling is "rizla" or, to be even more correct, "Rizla+".
    We always used Zig-Zags (though roasting in the oven and mixing into peanut butter was a fav).

                [Image: rizla-zigzag-PLO-hash.jpg]
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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That Smell - by Keith - 09-21-2015, 08:51 AM
RE: That Smell - by Weeded - 09-21-2015, 03:01 PM
RE: That Smell - by just mercedes - 09-21-2015, 03:29 PM
RE: That Smell - by rayheinrich - 09-21-2015, 04:22 PM
RE: That Smell - by billy - 09-21-2015, 05:32 PM



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